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    Quote Originally Posted by jenn26point2 View Post
    Nice cliche!
    Thank you! I was completely surprised that she left it in there, but she said much like repetitive 'he said' 'she said' 'he said' in dialogue, you just stop seeing it after a while and it doesn't disturb the flow.

    I do not know if I agree in this particular case, but it's so overused in sci-fi/fantasy movie previews that I've fallen in love with it.

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    I can hear the booming over voice now "In a time where... "
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    Quote Originally Posted by jenn26point2 View Post
    I can hear the booming over voice now "In a time where... "
    In a time where Gay Panda needs to have 34,000 words, Gay Panda only has 32,825!!!

    Motivation: if I don't finish, I have to listen to Octomom's rap song when it comes out next month.

    * starts writing furiously *

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    33,010. Anything to avoid Octomom's musical 'talents'!!!

    Also, that sugary margarita mix has given life to the most feverish cravings. * shakes fist * Gay Panda has terrible urges for candy right now, but those urges are still being slightly outdone by laziness. The hippie candy at Whole Foods is (thankfully) so very, very far away.

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    Just do it up Stephanie Meyers-style and add more adjectives.
    “If I didn't define myself for myself, I would be crunched into other people's fantasies for me and eaten alive.” --Audre Lorde

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    Quote Originally Posted by Owly View Post
    Just do it up Stephanie Meyers-style and add more adjectives.

    Lady Friend would slaughter me, and she's a talented beta reader so I can't piss her off.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Gay Panda View Post
    In a time where Gay Panda needs to have 34,000 words, Gay Panda only has 32,825!!!

    Motivation: if I don't finish, I have to listen to Octomom's rap song when it comes out next month.

    * starts writing furiously *
    i will help you make words to avoid that :|

    (side note, yeah i'll willingly listen to her rap anyways, i love a good train wreck)
    beautiful
    yeah you are

    I mean there's so many ants in my eyes! And there are so many TVs, microwaves, radios... I think, I can't, I'm not 100% sure what we have here in stock.. I don't know because I can't see anything! Our prices, I hope, aren't too low!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Owly View Post
    Just do it up Stephanie Meyers-style and add more adjectives.
    Even BETTER... Adverbs!!! -ly to the rescue!
    “You have your way. I have my way. As for the right way, the correct way, and the only way, it does not exist.”
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    Abusing the English language is NEVER the solution, ducklings.

    On a side note, I can't believe 50 Shades is a trilogy. I barely got through the first one. Bleh!!!

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